tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post8694180640265412313..comments2023-09-10T06:04:39.885-07:00Comments on Bloodroot Ink Poetry: rivalJonnia Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11336946073433330540noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-17779621231475639082009-07-28T02:23:34.899-07:002009-07-28T02:23:34.899-07:00powerful poem.powerful poem.Nadegehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04165880447473013492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-52582784760185639272009-07-14T19:09:43.178-07:002009-07-14T19:09:43.178-07:00Fantastic...Love this one...Where are you?
LindaFantastic...Love this one...Where are you?<br />LindaLinda S. Sochahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03281672541959206302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-70623514981809330232009-06-13T01:39:59.509-07:002009-06-13T01:39:59.509-07:00Wow. That's all I can say. WOW.Wow. That's all I can say. WOW.Maxinehttp://slamup.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-71353973931665155832009-05-16T12:26:00.000-07:002009-05-16T12:26:00.000-07:00Grace is always the last drop remaining after a fl...Grace is always the last drop remaining after a flood. But so often, the heat of my moment vaporizes it on the spot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-35524277817133373842009-05-16T10:36:00.000-07:002009-05-16T10:36:00.000-07:00Oh Ma'am, beautiful Jonnia.Oh Ma'am, beautiful Jonnia.Jen Jewel Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18087943319250381959noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-30645747619266791312009-04-30T12:42:00.000-07:002009-04-30T12:42:00.000-07:00I tried to forgive?
I've enjoyed reading this po...I tried to forgive? <br /><br />I've enjoyed reading this poem... and like Jamie I always feel that your poems ache to reveal so many other untold stories.CathMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14143141734424055810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-3771464148724554542009-04-27T20:29:00.000-07:002009-04-27T20:29:00.000-07:00Beautifully done. Sometime when someone wrongs yo...Beautifully done. Sometime when someone wrongs you, it is a challenge to be humble towards them.<br /><br />Thank you for sharing this poem...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06659774912297021009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-7176911473666987522009-04-27T17:37:00.000-07:002009-04-27T17:37:00.000-07:00Makes me fall back in time to rivals of old and ti...Makes me fall back in time to rivals of old and times when hugs were not shared.Woman in a Windowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14747858840088922077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-33616904366642264592009-04-27T15:58:00.000-07:002009-04-27T15:58:00.000-07:00Amazing.
Trespass
I walked in to see
you and fo...Amazing.<br /><br /><B>Trespass</B> <br /><br />I walked in to see<br />you and found you engaged,<br />serious effort,<br />I could tell, you pale,<br />eyes wide open, hands like claws,<br />you receiving her<br />embrace, while she cried.<br /><br />I had no notion what that<br />was all about but<br />I was sure I had<br />no business in your place,<br />not at that time.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-11130948839213990412009-04-27T15:47:00.000-07:002009-04-27T15:47:00.000-07:00Sometimes I try to write a truth without relying o...Sometimes I try to write a truth without relying on facts, but this one comes from an actual moment in my life. I'll tell you the story sometime. <br /><br />I really enjoy reading poems that leave me thinking, "What..?" Maybe that's why I end up writing that way more often than not. Thanks for reading and taking time to leave me a note!Jonnia Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11336946073433330540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-52706282532141721772009-04-27T15:18:00.000-07:002009-04-27T15:18:00.000-07:00Your poems always make me want to know the whole s...Your poems always make me want to know the whole story. How much is pure imagination and if there is a real story, what is it.Jamie {See Jamie blog}https://www.blogger.com/profile/18212749055211487304noreply@blogger.com