tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post5659441167139099232..comments2023-09-10T06:04:39.885-07:00Comments on Bloodroot Ink Poetry: offeringJonnia Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11336946073433330540noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-45269206237717018162012-01-24T06:45:08.374-08:002012-01-24T06:45:08.374-08:00We do tend to pile more weight on ourselves methin...We do tend to pile more weight on ourselves methinks than the world demands of us.<br /><br />A very thought provoking poem<br /><br />DavidDavid Agnewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05443559979200285475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-44329759068323836732009-04-26T18:43:00.000-07:002009-04-26T18:43:00.000-07:00In that this one reflects from everyone or anyone ...In that this one reflects from everyone or anyone some sacrifice, well, that's a well written poem. I enjoyed it.Woman in a Windowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14747858840088922077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-9279536423761904692009-04-11T09:43:00.000-07:002009-04-11T09:43:00.000-07:00Wow.I really don't know what else to say. This po...Wow.<BR/>I really don't know what else to say. This poem went straight to my heart. Thank you for sharing with us!<BR/>You are very talented!Barbarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12456091240901710538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-79948318095176996552009-04-06T12:23:00.000-07:002009-04-06T12:23:00.000-07:00Jonnia, I was inspired by your work to reply like ...Jonnia, I was inspired by your work to reply like this. I would say that there is always a price extracted for a promise, though the price is not always so hard to pay.<BR/><BR/><B>The Consequence Of My Promise</B><BR/><BR/>When I promised love<BR/>and honor in your service<BR/>I did not know then<BR/>I would soon become<BR/>an altar upon which you<BR/>would place your true stones.<BR/><BR/>In this way I am<BR/>now more than I was as you<BR/>add to my essence.christopherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-14949627308032808592009-04-05T10:14:00.000-07:002009-04-05T10:14:00.000-07:00Holding the weight of silence,a day's worth or mor...Holding the weight of silence,<BR/>a day's worth or more, becoming<BR/>the sacrifice, and forgetting why,<BR/>or is it something within you,<BR/>that makes you the perfect sacrifice, willing and silent and<BR/>always throbbing.<BR/>Excellent interior poem.Cynthiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10256391836026637655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-31996680030876487122009-04-04T14:50:00.000-07:002009-04-04T14:50:00.000-07:00Beautiful. Every word. "Struggle to remember the w...Beautiful. Every word. <BR/><BR/>"Struggle to remember the why of it"<BR/><BR/>Seems I am doing this about so many things in life.<BR/><BR/>Your poems are always a gift.L.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08030622402438915251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9181228738366484066.post-41550490097079612152009-04-04T14:24:00.000-07:002009-04-04T14:24:00.000-07:00“...if not for the crushing severity of this sacri...“...if not for the crushing severity of this sacrifice I have required of me... and I struggle to remember the why of it.” – powerful thought, it spoke volumes to me!CathMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14143141734424055810noreply@blogger.com