Watching the old man scowl
and stomp away,
I gently asked her,
Why?
A bit of wistful met her crinkled smile.
He just needs a bit of distance.
I think sometimes he's a little afraid of me,
if truth be told.
My forehead creased with questions I could not voice,
but her eyes met my confusion
with sudden shining depth,
pressing in on me
in a rush of calm
and blue.
He is fire, child,
and I am water.
February 2007
5 comments:
Beautifully, simply expressed.
Loved it
David
Thank you, my friend.
lovely ending. the dialogue fits very well.
Oh... i love ths. your ability to really transfer the mood and emotion to the reader has always inspired me.
Thank you so much for visiting my blog. I am very pleased to follow your blog. You write wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing it. Wow, what a find you are.
Post a Comment