a whispered lullaby of dry leaves rattling in the breeze...ahhh - you make me hear their music...i like..
I wont get all poetic with it but I hear that to. From the sounds they make leaving their limb, hitting others along the way, and my favorite is when the wind says'More!' and pushes them across the pavement or a driveway. No rest.
nice....love autmn and you capture a bit of her music in your words...can hear it...nicely penned...
There is something called the "death rattle" before a person dies which could be like rustling of leaves falling from the tree of life.
It creates that rattling sound in my mind...a cross
perfectly beautiful.smiles.
lovely capture of the season's sounds. :)
This is lovely,A gently warming poem to be read in the evening as daylight is fadingDavid
A song for dying leaves... Touching.
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a whispered lullaby of dry leaves rattling in the breeze...ahhh - you make me hear their music...i like..
I wont get all poetic with it but I hear that to. From the sounds they make leaving their limb, hitting others along the way, and my favorite is when the wind says'More!' and pushes them across the pavement or a driveway. No rest.
nice....love autmn and you capture a bit of her music in your words...can hear it...nicely penned...
There is something called the "death rattle" before a person dies which could be like rustling of leaves falling from the tree of life.
It creates that rattling sound in my mind...
a cross
perfectly beautiful.
smiles.
lovely capture of the season's sounds. :)
This is lovely,
A gently warming poem to be read in the evening as daylight is fading
David
A song for dying leaves... Touching.
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